Monday, August 10, 2015

Joel TS#7



For this tutor session I met up with Kwon. We started off just talking a bit and I corrected some of his grammar errors as we went along. After that, he said that he had written an essay for class and asked if I could look at it. His essay was about hockey and he seemed really interested in the topic and that showed in his writing. So as I was reading through his essay we worked on certain grammatical errors. I noticed that articles seemed to be a particularly difficult area for him. I also had him explain about certain things in the essay when I wasn’t quite sure what he was trying to say. All in all though I felt like his writing was pretty good aside from some small grammatical errors and word choice errors.

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