Genevieve TS #5

Jun's mother and I were concerned about the quality of the Skype calls. She asked if Jun could write essays and if I could provide feedback and I said I could certainly do that. So she began emailing me his writing. His first essay came in on July 17th. It was quite good with few mistakes. I used different colors to address the various mistakes and left notes about each error. I also offered praise on the overall product.